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hi! i recently read all of your comics, so here’s a little review
Writing 3/10 The writing style in your comics is a little simplistic, and there are a lot of small grammar and spelling mistakes. it’s totally ok that your writing isn’t the best, and it’s cool if english isn’t your first language, just something to work on a little Stories 6/10 Most of the stories you read had a decent to well written porn plot. I feel like your comics really shine with the lesbian and/or futa groupsex comics. That said, whenever you put tentacles in, it feels kinda shoehorned in? like it doesn’t really belong with the type of stories you’re usually writing Art 7/10 (continued below)
(continued, sorry i accidentally commented anonymously!) Art 7/10 Honestly, i really like the art! it’s reminiscent of a lot of early fan comics in a way i really appreciate, and you’ve got a lot of female anatomy down pat! the one real issue i have with your art: you can’t really draw men. something about their face and body… the men you draw are just kinda ugly? and i don’t doubt that eventually you’ll be able to draw men well, but the women you draw are so good!
Fuck why is there more on a porn comics website, is there an nsfw version of matpat we need them to do the lore on here so far I only know about the cheese dude who left because he got a gf who is nick and why would he hate this?
Isn’t she from chainsaw man
vaggie and denji gon’ be mad be mad abt dis charlie :'(
Why would denji care
hi! i recently read all of your comics, so here’s a little review
Writing 3/10
The writing style in your comics is a little simplistic, and there are a lot of small grammar and spelling mistakes. it’s totally ok that your writing isn’t the best, and it’s cool if english isn’t your first language, just something to work on a little
Stories 6/10
Most of the stories you read had a decent to well written porn plot. I feel like your comics really shine with the lesbian and/or futa groupsex comics. That said, whenever you put tentacles in, it feels kinda shoehorned in? like it doesn’t really belong with the type of stories you’re usually writing
Art 7/10 (continued below)
(continued, sorry i accidentally commented anonymously!)
Art 7/10
Honestly, i really like the art! it’s reminiscent of a lot of early fan comics in a way i really appreciate, and you’ve got a lot of female anatomy down pat! the one real issue i have with your art: you can’t really draw men. something about their face and body… the men you draw are just kinda ugly? and i don’t doubt that eventually you’ll be able to draw men well, but the women you draw are so good!
Just goon
Weirdo
do y’all never get drunk and rate smut? sounds like a sad life, man.
That a lot of writing and yeah that’s trye
It’s porn bru js cum and go😔🥀
see my response to the other anonymous person
Who is nick? If we say his name 3 times will he be summoned?
This get the seal of approval
Sesbian lex
Lesbians
Nick will definitely have a strong word or two about this
Probably
I meant to say lore not more
Accidentally made new comment instead of replying
Nick will HATE this..
on page 8 panel 3 its it not is
2 power porn comics back to back
I wonder if that Nick guy will comment
Hopefully cause then he will get pissed that I predicted his moves
Nick won’t like this
Fuck why is there more on a porn comics website, is there an nsfw version of matpat we need them to do the lore on here so far I only know about the cheese dude who left because he got a gf who is nick and why would he hate this?
I meant to say lore not more
Because nick hates lesbian shit and if I remember correctly he hates these two from hazbin hotel as well