Good art but the plot was way too fast. I know “porn logic” exists but please slow it down. It feels like there should have been an least two or more panels between panels 3 & 4. Art isn’t easy so that’s not an easy request but there should have been more tension. Maybe they watch a movie or something and either he was awkward wondering if it was a prank or she was awkward to fit some kind of shyness trope. Then you add the climax (no pun intended) where either he mistakenly calls her out thinking it’s a prank or she calls him out asking why he hasn’t made a move yet and you write his character with a naivety flaw which either way leads to her exposing herself for him.
look. the arts great but you tricked me into thinking there was a plot. either be just sex or a plot with sex but please don’t make it look like it has a story and
“Hi date”
“ok”
literally next pannel
“sex”
“ok”
w relationship
“sex?”
“Ok”
(pirate writing fire)
one thing only: i don’t know how to get to read this
Good art but the plot was way too fast. I know “porn logic” exists but please slow it down. It feels like there should have been an least two or more panels between panels 3 & 4. Art isn’t easy so that’s not an easy request but there should have been more tension. Maybe they watch a movie or something and either he was awkward wondering if it was a prank or she was awkward to fit some kind of shyness trope. Then you add the climax (no pun intended) where either he mistakenly calls her out thinking it’s a prank or she calls him out asking why he hasn’t made a move yet and you write his character with a naivety flaw which either way leads to her exposing herself for him.
Damn, explained that better than I ever could. Props
my nigga this is the comment sextion not a storyline 💔💔💔
Heh… I see what you did there
relationship speedrun
Literally. But feels like we’re missing the lead up to her asking him out
look. the arts great but you tricked me into thinking there was a plot. either be just sex or a plot with sex but please don’t make it look like it has a story and
what the fuck?!
Its joke, like the comic his sentence cuts middle of
I see what you did there you